Friday, March 18, 2016

Summary

Detail 1 = Incident with charley Thomas,
Detail 2 = Sportsman park
Detail 3 = noble experiment


The story is about Branch Rickey who was responsible for Jackie Robinson joining the white major league baseball. With the incident with charley Thomas, charley was sleeping in his cot (a bed that was not very good to sleep on) and charley was crying himself to sleep and scratch the skin off his hands with his finger nails and his body was shaking. after all that branch Rickey wanted to have any black person to sit where ever they wanted like instead of black people sitting on the back they can sit front and/or back. next, branchy

Friday, March 4, 2016

Theme

Private I. Guana

The conflict was that Liz could't find her husband, Leon, because he didn't show up to his home last night. Private I. Guana reacted to the conflict challenged because after he hung up the phone call he said that "chameleons are hard to find". The theme of the story is to not assume that people are boring because they might live a secret life.

Monday, February 22, 2016

Papper Reflection

What I think that I did well in the writing process because three of the categories and so I only needed to do three and they were easy. It was not challenging because they weren't hard to find, and I used the one that The class did together to help me by giving an example of what it is. My goal for the next writing assignment is that to make thing a little more explained so people can understand and to use less little words that I use every day.

Friday, January 29, 2016

Research

Notes:

Physical Feature
  • Soft skin, bones, little
  • Skin can reflect blue light
  • 200 different kinds of anglerfish
Paraphrase:

The anglerfish Physical feature has a whole different kinds of scary appearances.(Some have different colors, jaws, and how big they are.)  www.SeaSky.Org


Notes:

Habitat

  • 5,000 FT below the Gulf of Mexico.
  • In the deep sea.
  • Get difficult by water pressure 2,200 pound square inch.
Paraphrase:

The anglerfish habitat is in the shallow tropical environments (In the Golf of Mexico, Atlantic, Antarctic.) www.Discovery.com.


Notes:

Diet


  • Eat meat (carnivore)
  • Can eat fish 2x bigger the it's mouth 
  • Small fish are common in the dark water
Paraphrase:

The anglerfish Diet is Shrimp, tiny fish, baby fish, sea snails, ect (small fish are common in the dark water). WWW.National Geographic.com 

Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Paraphrasing

step 1: Notes

  • Some were in the year 1965 and 1975 a lot of killer whales were taken captive for the aquariums.
  • today its at odds with the law to people hurt or abuse a killer whale.
  • but having a killer whale inside a aquarium its not unavoidable considered to be abuse
  • some of the people think that the people in sea aquarium have abuse Lolita  



Step 2: Paraphrasing Paragraph

Some were in the year 1965 and 1975 a lot of killer whales were taken captive for the aquariums, but today its at odds with the law to people hurt or abuse a killer whale. But having a killer whale inside a aquarium its not unavoidable considered to be abuse, But some of the people think that the people in the sea aquarium have abuse a killer whale named Lolita.





Step 1: Notes

  • The people that work at the government aren't sure if they want to put the killer whales back to the sea is a wonderful idea.
  • The killer whales that have bean in a aquarium they may not be able to look for food by them selfs 
  • There is a good explanation why they are not putting back the killer whales were they lived. 
  • The person that has Lolita was named Garrett and what he said that if she went home things wood be incompatible. 


Step 2: Paraphrasing Paragraph

The people that work at the government aren't sure if they want to put the killer whales back to the sea is a wonderful idea, and the killer whales that have bean in a aquarium they may not be able to look for food by them selfs. There is a good explanation why they are not putting back the killer whales were they lived because the person that has Lolita was named Garrett and what he said that if she went home things wood be incompatible.








Friday, December 11, 2015

Topic main idea

Heading 1-main idea
The attack in Kenya was just as terrible as what happened in paris. Fighters killed students and other at Kenya's Garissa university college yet back in april there was nothing about it on Facebook and twitter.





heading 2-main idea
The city of Beirut Lebanon  was attack the day before the day paris was attack it was hit y the same violent group islamic state also called ISIS the group wants to start its own country under islamic law and has taken over parts of Syria and Iraq.






Heading- main idea
One thing seems clear though people are more likely to care when terrible things happen to people and places witch they feel close.







Heading- main idea
It is that closeness to paris that made so many Americans express their sadness and shock on Facebook and twitter

Friday, December 4, 2015

Author's POV and Purpose

1) The author's point of view is how people care more when they know a place or bean their before and people went to paris for vacation's and so people have a different reaction then if other places got bombed.

Evidence 1: "Several people quickly found an article on the attack written by the british broadcasting corp. news service. Then, they passed the article on to other people. soon thousands and thousands of people had read the article. what many people did not notice was when the article was written. it was first published more than seven years ago, on April 3, 2015.

Evidence 2: "The city of Beirut, Lebanon, was attacked the day before Paris was attacked. It was hit by the same violet group, islamic state also called ISIS, the group wants to start its own country under Islamic law and has taken over parts of Syria and Iraq."

Evidence 3: "Some people think the difference is unfair, even racist. They believe it shows that Americans and over other Westerners care less about people who are not Western or white."

2) I do agree because people got more sad when paris got bombed but people had a different reaction when Beirut, and Lebanon got bombed.

3) It is Inform because he/she is giving us information about the reaction on the paris bombing then the other bombing that were in Beirut, and Lebanon.